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April 21, 2013
by malmsburyps
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Malmsbury weather is as wild as a…

When the weather in Malmsbury turned cold and stormy rather abruptly last term the Prep-One All Stars decided to test their writing skills and write some weather similes.  There was a lot of discussion about how wet the rain might be and whether wind that is as wild as a tiger would be worse than wind as wild as a snake.  Here are our finished weather poems.

  Weather Simile Book


 

 

What was your favourite weather simile?

How would you describe the weather?

April 21, 2013
by malmsburyps
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As clever as a…

Grade Prep/One have been showing off their writing expertise this week. We have been learning how to compare two things using similes and have been creating some great imagery in our writing sessions.
We started thinking about how we could describe an ice-cream…

Then we worked out ways to describe our favourite soft toys.

Then we had a go at writing our own.

What words would you use to describe your favourite toy?

What other things could we write similes about?

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